英语一和英语二的短文写作评分标准一样，主要是以下四个原则：语言准确、组织连贯、内容完整、语言多样。其中语言多样是最为重要的，所以在写作的时候也需要进行词汇和句式上的升级。英语一是漫画作文展示的要么是社会现象要么是好的品质。但无论属于哪种情况，我们都可以采用经典的三段结构来写，分别是图画描述段、寓意阐释段和个人总结段。另外根据历年的考题，试卷会考一幅图、寓意相反或相似的两幅图。

　　第一段：图画描述段

　　一幅图

　　As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, 整体描写, which successfully captures our eyes. After a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that细节描写. Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　两幅图相反

　　As is vividly depicted in the first photo,整体描写, which successfully captures our eyes. On the contrary, the second picture describes that细节描写, finally completing the contrast of the two pictures. Apparently, what the two drawings have subtly conveyed by their striking contrast is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　两幅图相似

　　As is vividly depicted in the first photo,整体描写, which successfully captures our eyes. In the same way, the second picture describes that细节描写, finally completing the comparison of the two pictures. Apparently, what the two drawings have subtly conveyed by their analogy is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　第二段：寓意阐释段

　　社会问题

　　Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. On the top of list is that +原因一. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that +原因二.

　　共性原因多是经济、法律、认知等原因，以下语言可作为参考。

　　经济：Any behavior has profound economic motivations, and so does the performance of the character in the drawing.

　　法律：The current state of the affair depicted by the drawer may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the lack of legal penalty.

　　认知：The general public have failed to realize the importance of……and a big part of their attention has been distracted by the so-called “great events”.

　　教育：Our education tends to stress test-taking and mechanical learning over the ability to confront realistic problems, including ……抽象品质

　　What the drawer conveyed in the picture can be clearly and accurately summarized as following: ……plays a vital role in our daily life. To begin with, It goes without saying that anyone who is in possession of the quality of ……will be optimistic facing the troubles, and be likely to overcome the obstacles of life and achieve their destination. In addition, the quality will facilitate the growth of the economy and make it the winner in the competitive world.

　　第三段：个人总结段

　　社会问题

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.

　　抽象品质

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to carry forward the quality. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of +抽象品质and embrace a bright future.